Sample Research Paper Thoughts

Based on the sample paper, i would want to organize it the same way. I think that I want to also make stong connections from the quotes that I use to the essay. I dont want to have like weak quotes because then my essay would be weak. It wouldnt make sense to do it that way. I want to also have a strong thesis to work with like the way this essay was worded. i think that the thesis was stong and the bulid up of the essay was also strong because of the detail and the use of the sources because it gave it an added bonus to the essay. It gave the essay more to work with and more to understand. Overall this essay was strong so i want to use this same and an example of what i should do in my essay so that my research paper can be strong as well.